[Harmony-Review] Comments

[Tim Engelhardt]

Dear all,

Thanks for preparing the Contributor Agreements and putting all your work in this project.

Some observations:


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lines 15-58

The texts are intended for wide use by the communities and should be as simple as feasible. Therefore, I'd propose to get rid of the lawyyerish "shall" in the definitions.
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lines 51-55

In the HA-CAA agreements, the numbering got mixed up.
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lines 82-88

In the HA-CAA agreements, the patent license does not seem to be conditioned upon compliance with lit. (f).
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line 90

In the HA-CAA agreements, a reference to 2.1(e) - the patent license - is missing.
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line 95

In the HA-CAA agreements, a reference to 2.1(e) - the patent license - is missing.
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line 101

In the HA-CAA agreements, a reference to 2.1(e) - the patent license - is missing.
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line 109

In the HA-CAA agreements, a reference to 2.1(e) - the patent license - is missing.
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line 117

In the HA-CAA agreements, a reference to 2.1(e) - the patent license - is missing.
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Best regards,

Tim Engelhardt, LL.M.
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