[Harmony-Drafting] Project Harmony May 18th meeting - agenda and documents

[Andrew Sinclair]

Hi all,

Tomorrow's Harmony meeting is from 9am to 1pm US Pacific time (San 
Francisco).  That's 4pm to 8pm UTC.

== Location and dial-ins ==
Mark Radcliffe is hosting the live meeting at the DLA Piper San 
Francisco office:
http://www.dlapiper.com/global/about/offices/office.aspx?office=6
555 Mission Street, Suite 2400
San Francisco, California  94105-2933

** If you haven't already done so, please let me know if you attending 
the live meeting or attending via Telepresence from another DLA Piper 
office.  Otherwise, you won't be on the guest list. **

If you are joining by phone, the numbers are:
  * International callers dial +1-303-248-9125
  * United States callers dial 1-888-472-4293
  * Access Code is 8056930

== Agenda ==
  * Process Overview
  * Discuss comments - see attached ods file
  * Process going forward
  * Process for adoption and transition
  * AOB

== Documents ==
For convenience, I'm re-sending the documents that Allison Randall sent 
yesterday:
  * Comment list
  * 4 drafts

Best regards,

Andrew Sinclair
Legal Counsel
Canonical
office: +1 781-761-9096
mobile: +1 617-417-3377


-------- Original Message --------
Subject: [Harmony-Drafting] Drafts for discussion in May 18th meeting
Date: Mon, 16 May 2011 02:29:32 -0700
From: Allison Randal <allison at lohutok.net>
To: harmony-drafting at lists.harmonyagreements.org

I've attached drafts of the agreements incorporating the Alpha review
comments, for discussion in our meeting this Wednesday. I've also
included a spreadsheet summarizing the issues raised in the review and
suggested solutions.

There are 3 different "redline" versions, one has minor changes from the
review, one is a clarity pass based on feedback, and one is an editorial
structure pass to improve readability. I separated the three kinds of
changes to make it easier for the group to work through and
approve/reject the changes. (I suspect the "minor" and "structure"
changes will pass quickly, while the "clarity" changes will need more
discussion.)

Looking forward to talking with you all again,
Allison

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