[Harmony-Drafting] Drafts for discussion in May 18th meeting

[Allison Randal]

I've attached drafts of the agreements incorporating the Alpha review 
comments, for discussion in our meeting this Wednesday. I've also 
included a spreadsheet summarizing the issues raised in the review and 
suggested solutions.

There are 3 different "redline" versions, one has minor changes from the 
review, one is a clarity pass based on feedback, and one is an editorial 
structure pass to improve readability. I separated the three kinds of 
changes to make it easier for the group to work through and 
approve/reject the changes. (I suspect the "minor" and "structure" 
changes will pass quickly, while the "clarity" changes will need more 
discussion.)

Looking forward to talking with you all again,
Allison
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